1st attempt

From the 1st attempt i didn't change alot because I felt that the mood of the sequence was good and had the feeling I was looking for. The aspects of the sequence I changed was I changed A film by David Fincher to Michael Vernile, I made the scene with the title stay on longer because I thought it was took quick, next I reversed the scenes where the person is cutting the film and cutting paper, felt that it gave an interesting effect on that section, and finally at the end I took out directed by David Fincher because I didn't want it to be a David Fincher film.

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